Arucard
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Why So Serious?
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Nov 8, 2008 13:55:26 GMT -5
Post by Arucard on Nov 8, 2008 13:55:26 GMT -5
How can I trust someone if that someone has broken my trust, My heart is empty, Its cold as ice, As it reach to break, It leaks out of water, That water drips and slips away, That trust, That moment, All within those you have broken, I may not trust you or your friends but that don’t mean we can’t be friends, Just friends without that trust, You have to work your trust with me, You have to make me understand why should I ever trust you again, You have to repair that broken trust, You have to work hard, That don’t mean be hateful towards me, Just show me that I can trust you once more.
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Nov 8, 2008 15:06:29 GMT -5
Post by Conor on Nov 8, 2008 15:06:29 GMT -5
Good work. Really brought felling to a page of text.
9/10
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ScottCool
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Formerly ScottCool
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Nov 8, 2008 15:27:15 GMT -5
Post by ScottCool on Nov 8, 2008 15:27:15 GMT -5
I agree, you made me see how you feel
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Nov 9, 2008 0:44:21 GMT -5
Post by nathanielgresham on Nov 9, 2008 0:44:21 GMT -5
It has a personal touch and sort of human characteristic to it. Good Job!
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Nov 9, 2008 6:28:31 GMT -5
Post by Conor on Nov 9, 2008 6:28:31 GMT -5
Great Job Arucard. You get one kudo.
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Arucard
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Why So Serious?
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Nov 15, 2008 3:28:50 GMT -5
Post by Arucard on Nov 15, 2008 3:28:50 GMT -5
Thanks for the comments
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Nov 15, 2008 15:45:08 GMT -5
Post by Conor on Nov 15, 2008 15:45:08 GMT -5
kudo=Karma
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